Comments on: Shoelaces . . . a short story

By: Supergirl

Supergirl — Wed, 17 Sep 2008 22:16:41 +0000

I remember taking some cousins to the store in taylorsville. I think there was a chocolate candy bar kicked under the isle racks…

By: kingju1ce

kingju1ce — Tue, 01 Apr 2008 17:58:15 +0000

Someone peed in their eye! Oh that is hilarious!
Oh man, I hope they never live that down…

By: Edgewriter

Edgewriter — Mon, 31 Mar 2008 22:18:46 +0000

Or I could write another one called “Asparagus Pee in the Eye”

By: Edgewriter

Edgewriter — Mon, 31 Mar 2008 22:06:38 +0000

I could call it, “The Taylorsville Thrift Store Bombing”

By: kingju1ce

kingju1ce — Mon, 31 Mar 2008 21:15:34 +0000

I remember the parts from our childhood, good story. Now you will have to write a story that is true to your form and write a story relating to the time that we took one of our younger bros to a grocery store and an accident occured.

By: Edgewriter

Edgewriter — Sat, 29 Mar 2008 15:13:25 +0000

Thanks. I just started with the word Shoelaces and went from there.

By: Mother of Edge

Mother of Edge — Sat, 29 Mar 2008 14:18:03 +0000

It’s nice to see more facets to your writing style. I enjoyed the story.

By: Professor Shoelace

Professor Shoelace — Sat, 29 Mar 2008 02:06:16 +0000

Nice story! I hope everyone appreciates the simple things, like Shoelaces.